Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!

Love is choice. Not a feeling. Sex only will not hold a couple together. No foundation at all to stand on when trouble comes.

And it will come!!

The main reason for not having sex before getting married. So you can build something together.

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actually, I think this poem is fascinating. Whilst most people associate sex with love, or a consumation of that, you speak of it as a trap, like a spider's web. You also cover the confusion that sex causes people to feel; does this mean something more.

A fav from me. xx

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Dude, whenever someone writes a poem about sex it just makes them look perverted. But you kind of make it a beautiful thing instead of some dirty hanky panky in the back seat of a car. Which is good.

Awesome job; wish I could be as literate as you but I have the attention span of a squirrel with ADD.

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Your comment on your poem is what really got me. I've had sex, and it's not what it seems. I was tempted until I could take no more, so I gave in. They wanted me for my looks, not who I was inside. They took the thing that I held dear, my virginity. Now I have nothing. They took what they wanted, and when they were done, the threw me away, to rot. So now I have nothing. I've lost the only thing that meant anything. Now no one wants me and I'm all alone. I'm waiting for someone to come take me home. To hold me, and love me for who I really am. But until then..... I'm left in the darkness. Alone.

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I am so sorry you all feel that way o.O Yeah, there are some--and maybe even many--that only want sex for sex, sans relationship or meaning. But sex itself is not inherently bad. I personally enjoy a two-year-and-still-going relationship, sex included. If it were only about the sex, the novelty would be long gone and we would certainly have other partners by now. I also personally know other couples who are also in long-term relationships, sex included.

Some people think that ideally, sex would be about love or something deeper or whatever. I think it depends greatly on one's own religion and values, but in my opinion sex for sex's sake is not a bad thing either. There are times when raw animal sex appeals much more than any touch-feely sex, and you CAN have both with the same person--I do it all the time. I don't even really understand the big taboo with sexual flings, as long as one is being physically and emotionally safe.

One more thing: the term, "making love"? It's a creepy label to put on sex. Just thought I'd throw that out there ^_^

I do think the poem shows a very real aspect of sex, and the artist's comments hold a great deal of truth as well. But there is a -whole- other side to the story; if one were to choose to ignore it, one would be choosing to forgo one of the more basic and wonderful activities in life.

dude you should white poams for a liveing your good at them you may have lost your verginity but you have talent impress the girl you love hopefully she will love you in return

Your whole idea is quite clear and i agree that sex with true love is really unnessiary.

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It only takes a soul to understand love. For he without a true heart just knows of sorrow.

"Curiousity has its own price. Innocence is another thing."

If we squandor our gifts and talents, then what's the use of imagination?

Brilliant.

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in my opinion I think is so brilliant the poem.Wonderful.

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