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Love is lusting
   Love is trusting
      Love is thrusting.

Minus two
   if you do-
But know
   that Sex
is a vex;
    A curse
for the worse.

A voice
   without choice.

Indeed,
   to lope
     and cope.

Pulling the pieces
    Through nephews and nieces.

Making mingle
   be single.

Singular-
   Like the word unheard.

But those
who speak
   are weak.

Just fuck
  and with luck -
The Sun
  will shine
      Devine.  

But those who care
   will spare;
Those who live
   will give.

But what is life
   without Sex?

A goddamn vex.
This poem, or whatever it may be; doesn't live up to any conventional standards. Of course, not that it was written in that context. It just sort of appeared after awhile. It's far from good - it merely focuses on a small debate against a large subject.

The size of the argument is meaningless, seeing as so many fall for the act of sex. They see it as the most exciting part of their life. Why love someone for their qualities? When you can love them for their sexual indentations. People don't think about what each other are feeling. They are fixated on putting their keys into someone else's creation.

The poem may seem at first, to be in the act of sex; but it's a sarcastic tone.

In a sense, saying that, a life without sex would be useless.

Aye, there are also curse words in here; not for fun either, to fit the context. The vulgarity in which our society finds sexual interactions so appealing. Fucking and thrusting. It's what they want right? It's what gets them going.

They miss the important pieces. They go straight for the act.

Like loving a cat; not for it's appeal of warmth. But loving it for the bones and blood.

There is more to the action then what people see.

To think of a heavenly act, so downgraded by society; that now it's disgusting. Not appealing.
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dogllover111602 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
he
said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
he
said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and
............once
again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f......ace the...
... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said.... You're not pretty
you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
♥♥ ~~THE END~~ ♥♥.......Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15
pages in 15 minutes, you're safe.
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vampiresballad Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
So true ^^
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Toasted-Muffin Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
Dude life with out sex is a pain in the ass...

which means working for sex is also a pain in the ass 

so why not just mastorbate and lay next to the one we love. when fighting always comes from trying to have sex..my life sucks and i am venting like a mother fucker right now
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AshMashTheFlash Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem shows the power of simplicity and I love it. I've always found it very hard to do and, therefore, appreciate that you have done it so it well.
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GoreyPsychoChick Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Great poem, and GREAT description. I want to wait until I'm married to have sex with someone. I want to know them before I even do such a thing. Sex is something that you can't have with just anybody. It's something very special and it shows that you truely care and love that person. Heck, if I ever get married, like some other people, I'd probably have sex with the person I love on my wedding night. It makes sense, right? But still, great poem. I really enjoyed it and it really gets to me.
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Love4MusicGirl03 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
wow. great poem for that other point of view. this is great
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hoonamity Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
BRAVO<3 omg love love love
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dannyboy1994 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Brava! And I know what you're saying... At least I think I do...
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ace-is-king Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
HAHAHAHAHA
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ImagineI Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
Hey- wicked poem : ) I can clearly see your thought process. How did you make the preview for this the text by the way?
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